Play Images: Working with Colour

I am slightly apprehensive to start working with colour. It has so much influence in bringing harmony to a composition, yet so far all I have been concentrating on is the relationship of forms.

In my sketchbook, using a set of coloured pencils, I did some tester colour palettes - trying to figure out which colours I felt fit best together. It's difficult to know, however, if the ones I feel go well together myself will also appeal to another person due to the subjective nature in which we appreciate art.

I then began applying these colour palettes to the compositions I have been developing in my sketchbook, to create a series of coloured pencil drawings. I feel that these are working really well and would to create more - but using coloured pencil is too labour intensive for producing these images. I think I should move onto some other form of media - like collage or gouache? As well as maybe start working on a larger scale. 

601 Extended Essay Draft Submission

Play Images: Ink Drawings

repetitive and extensive thumbnailing, to refine compositions.

• These ink drawings represent the 'Play' category of images within my practical research. I have started with this category, so that I enter into it uninfluenced by rules - that I will develop later on - and therefore am working purely from my own creative intuition.  
• The aim is to achieve a form of balance, rhythm or harmony in each of the compositions. 
• So far I have been doing a number of thumbnails and then taking these into ink drawings. 
• I have found this process very effective - in the thumbnails I often repeatedly draw the same collection of forms, refining the composition as I go along. 
• I then select the best thumbnails out of my sketchbook and take these into ink. 
• Filling in the shapes in plain black I think helps me purely focus the relationships of the forms and the overall balance of the composition, without the influence of other visual elements such as colour. 
• The next step I think, however, is to select the best compositions and then start making them in colour. 

James Joyce's Aesthetic Arrest

On James Joyce's epiphany from Campbell Extracts on Vimeo.

"Joyce's formulae for the aesthetic experience is that is does not move you to want to possess the object, that he calls pornography, nor does it move you to criticise and reject the object that he calls didactics, social criticism and all that kind of thing. It is the holding the object and he says you put a frame around it and see it as one thing and then seeing it as one thing you become aware of the relationship of part to part, and part to the whole and the whole is to the parts. This is the essential aesthetic factor - rhythm, the rhythmic relationships and when a fortunate rhythm has been struck by the artist that is the radiance, that is the epiphany"

Campbell Extracts. 2014. "On James Joyce's epiphany" Available from: https://vimeo.com/89773884

Group Tutorial

Feedback on essay:

• Good use of formal academic register. 
• Be clear on what principles or 'rules' of design are being evaluated. 
• How are you forming these rules - are they based on one study, or are they a summary of all of your research? 
• Let the creation of your practical work inform your conclusions. 

Tips on writing:

• Explain who someone is and why they are relevant to your argument before quoting them. 
• Clearly define all terms that you are using ie. what is composition? what kind of composition are you looking at? What do you mean by design? What do you mean by visually appealing? 
• Remember to leave independent conclusions to the conclusion - have to remain unbiased when discussing source material. 

Malika Favre

Malika Favre is an french illustrator and designer, mainly working within editorial or publishing contexts. I have identified that she may use principles of gestalt psychology in the composition of her her design work. For example, in this print entitled "Balloons", Favre has used the gestalt principle of proximity to create the girls dress and collection of balloons. 

Favre, interestingly, has also created a body of work using the similar compositional principle of the golden ratio. She was a part of the publication "Golden Meaning", curated by GraphicDesign&, that contained the work 55 design practitioner's using the asymmetrical proportions of the golden ratio. Her interest in using a mathematical approach to composition and evidence of gestalt principles within her design work could lend her as an appropriate case study for my written essay. 

Research Notes - "The Art of Looking Sideways" by Alan Fletcher

Creating my own Visual Language

• I have selected a collection of 10 abstract or geometric shapes to work from in the making of my images. 
• This was to act as a solution to the fact that I was struggling to settle on a content to base my images upon. 
• I choose using simplistic forms because stripping images down to their bare bones will help me focus solely on the composition. 
• I also do not want to have to worry about communicate anything - this is all about developing my own understanding of composition. 
• I am not going to limit myself, however, to using only these 10 shapes. This is just a starting point to help me generate imagery and apply compositional principles to image-making. 

Questions for William Luz

William Luz replied to my email saying that he would very happy to answer some questions. Here is what I sent him: 

"On your website I was really drawn to your paintings and the sketchbook drawings. I was hoping you could explain a little bit about what drives or influences this kind of work. 

There is a real sense of balance and sometimes symmetry in the way the forms interact with each other - is this something you have consciously refined or is it more intuitive? Also, what are you trying to achieve as a practitioner or communicate to the viewer with these images?"

With these questions I would like to find out to what extent he consciously thinks about achieving order, harmony or balance in his work - as to me the images in question very clearly exemplify these principles. 

William Luz

William Luz is an illustrator and part of the artistic collective NousVous. I think that his paintings and sketchbook series are very relevant to my study of composition. For me, personally, they encapsulate order, balance and harmony in an image. The way the forms interact with each other and the edges of composition, creates this sense of necessity in all of the visual elements to create a unified and balanced whole. The forms in his images have a feeling of controlled tension, as they are confined to a space by the edges of the composition or other surrounding objects. In his sketchbook series, many of the drawings also use symmetry to achieve a sense of balance. He also clearly has a strong sense of colour - using colours of similar brightness, hue or tone to balance opposing sides of a composition. 

Due to this I think that his practice could be a possible case study for my extended essay. There is limited information on his practice online, so I decided to email him to see if he would be happy to answer some questions. 

Plan of Action for Practical

1. Make own visual language - by using the same basic shapes for each of the image-making processes I hope to remove any subjective preference based on content. 
2. PLAY - make a series of images using your own intuition to find a sense of balance, order and harmony.
3. Write a list of rules based on your theoretical research outlining how to achieve order and balance in composition. 
4. Create a series of images BASED ON THE RULES.
5. Make a series of images BREAKING THE RULES. 
6. Select (maybe 3) from each process of image-making - develop into a more finalised outcome, using screen-print? 
7. Show the images to people and see which they prefer? - propose an exhibition or do a survey?

(From now on aim to do one process of image-making a week - 13/11 PLAY, 20/11 RULES, 27/11 BREAKING THE RULES)

"A Theory of Pure Design" by Denman. W Ross

Ross, D. (1907) "A Theory of Pure Design" Boston and New York Houghton: Mifflin and Company.

"Art is regarded as the one activity of man which has no scientific basis, and the appreciation of art is said to be a matter of taste in which no two persons can be expected to agree. It is my purpose of this book to show how, in the practice of art, as in all other practices, we use certain terms and follow certain principles. Being defined and explained, these terms and principles may be known and understood by everybody"

"While an understanding of the terms of principles of art will not, in itself, enable anyone to produce important works, such works are not produced without it."

"In a sense this book is a contribution to science rather than to art. It is a contribution to science made by a painter, who has used his art in order to understand his art, not to produce works of art."

"The only thing which remains in art, beyond measurable quantities and qualities, is the personality, the peculiar ability or genius of the artist himself. That, I believe, admits of no explanation. The element of personality is what we mean when we speak of the element of inspiration in a work of art. Underlying this element of personality are the terms and principles of art. In them the artist has found the possibility of expression; in them his inspiration is conveyed to his fellowmen."

"While I am unable to find any definition or explanation of beauty, I know where to look for it, where I am sure to find it. The beautiful is revealed, always, so far as I know, in the forms of order, in the modes of harmony, of balance, or of rhythm. While there are many instances of harmony, balance and rhythm, which are not particularly beautiful, there is, I believe, nothing really beautiful which is not orderly in one or the other, in two, or in all three of these modes."

"This is perhaps our nearest approach to a definition of beauty; that is is a supreme instance of order, intuitively felt, instinctively appreciated."

"The order of the whole must never be diminished"

"I object to the word 'decoration' as commonly used by designers, because it implies that additions are likely to be improvements, that to multiply features, to enrich surfaces, is worth while or desirable."

"As designers we ought to avoid additions, if possible. We ought to make them only when in so doing we are able to increase the order of the whole"

Ross could be used to support many of Arnheims arguments, as he stresses the importance of the unified, or in this case an ordered, 'whole' as well as principles such as balance and harmony in design. Similarly to Arnheim, he claims to be taking a scientific approach to the study of design, through which its basic principles and terms can be deconstructed to build a better understanding of artistic practice. The direct link he makes between beauty and forms of order, supports my building argument that balance and harmony of composition achieves better design work. The argument that artistic personality is expressed through the use of such principles, builds upon my theoretical analysis of Arnheim as well as provides another perspective on my own developing idea that rules in design practice could limit creative expression. 

Research notes: 'A History of Pictures' Hockney, D & Gaynor, M.

Hockney, D & Gaynor, M. (2016) A History of Pictures. London: Thames & Hudson

Teaching To see

This is a documentary focusing on the teachings and students of design professor Inge Druckrey. The way she speaks about looking and translating information is very valuable to me as a practitioner, but also many of the discussions surrounding graphic design could be seen to be relevant to theories highlighted in my essay, as well as in a more general context the discipline of illustration. 

The importance of learning to look in translating information effectively and interestingly. 

• "Training the eye is very, very important, you can't come up with ideas if you don't see first. What interested me was to teach student to see in an abstract manner, so not to see an object but to see it as something round or square, something textured or smooth and to translate what they see into a form language." (Druckery, 2012)
• "When an art teacher asked me to look at a tree and I looked at a tree but I only saw the noun - tree. I didn't see the beautiful progression from heavier to lighter branches or the overlapping of branches and the resulting negative area. The potential of the human eye is so impressive and wonderful. It is very important for designers, or anyone in the field of art to develop a greater ability to see." (Druckrey, 2013)

The importance of order and functionality in graphic design, and how to achieve this.

• "I gave students a 9 square grid which its ordering principle allowed them to come up with a coherent composition, the actual design elements were up to them.""Limiting is important that students have a very clear playground set up and it helps them focus." (Druckrey, 2012)

This method of teaching could refer to the idea of whether we need or benefit from the use of rules (of composition) to create artwork. It could be triangulated with other art practices such as Swiss style graphic design - particularly their use of a rigid grid system to make posters - to conflict with the theory of art being intuitively made and instinctively appreciated. 

• "Graphic design it's seeing and envisioning. The eye has to move around enjoyably, there's nothing where you can get stuck, it all flows and holds together, there's nothing unnecessary." (Druckrey, 2012)
• "It's interesting to see how a poster or cover design are different from information design because both have to function at a distance reading. They have to capture the attention of someone walking by, and entice them to look at more detail information." 
• "Graphic designs always visualising an idea and its definitely about drawing attention, its about informing, its about distance reading but its also about symbolising something because like poetry you have to get the essence of something" (Druckrey, 2012)
• "Bad maps have a dominance of bright colours and simply get noisy, typographic details get lost in meaningless dark shading of the buildings. Its astonishing how sensitive our eyes are in distinguishing the most subtle variation in colour." (Druckrey, 2012)

I think the way graphic design is described in these quotes could also refer to illustration - some contexts of our discipline, such as editorial or poster design, demand immediacy and functionality in their reading (from a distance) thus making it important for it to also embody these principles of order, in visual elements such as colour. Illustration is also often used alongside type meaning it needs to be able to work in harmony with elements of graphic design. 

• "The eye wants to look at an orderly set of marks on a page, the eye wants pattern, the eye wants order, the eye wants relative perfection, the eye wants something that is reliable, that it can count on, the eye is a very conservative part of reading. On the other hand, you have the hand and the hand is the radical aspect of writing. So the hand wants to write faster and faster, writing changes because we're writing faster and faster all the time and the hand wants to write expressively so when you're writing your signature your not thinking about getting every little letter perfect you're thinking about the way you write your signature and that's why its very hard to forge someone's signature because you can't do it slowly you have to write it fast and expressively - that's the radical hand at work. So the whole history of writing can be looked at as an elegant little conflict between the conservative eye which wants everything perfect and rational, and the radical hand which wants to write fast and write expressively, and its this constant battle that makes our environment that we look at when we look at lettering." (Holmes, K.) 

Holmes is speaking about typography, however essentially she is discussing the conflict between order and expression in visual communication. According to principles of graphic or pure design, order is essential to communicating effectively; however in asserting order into an art form how do you control the artist personality or imperfection of the human hand? The quality and importance of the handmade is extensively discussed in design and art practice, therefore it begs the question whether complete order is desirable, or does removing the sense of the human hand render an image to some extent unsuccessful. Can you achieve both a sense of order and expression in an image?

"Teaching to See" (2012) Directed by Andrei Sevemy. [Online] Available from : http://teachingtosee.org/film/TeachingToSee.html [Accessed 09/11/17]

Tufte, E. (2013) "'Inge Druckrey : Teaching to See' trailer" [Online] Available from: https://vimeo.com/67108069 [Accessed 09/11/17]

Rob Lowe AKA Supermundane

Rob Lowe, who goes under the pseudonym Supermundane, is an illustrator, graphic designer and artist practitioner. Hearing him speak in college, I feel that the visual aims of his work resonate with theories I have been exploring within this research project. 

I think that he could be a possible case study for Chapter III of my extended essay. Following on from the talk I did some more research into his practice - reading or watching online interviews. It could be an idea, however, to further contact him again in order to speak about his work? 

Found Quotes :

• "Because there's so little there, you've got to get it all right; you don't know where to hide. They look very simple, but they take a lot of iterations before I'm happy" (Lowe in Himelfarb, 2014)
• “I put simplicity at the heart of everything. Even though some of my work can be complex it is still simple. I try to approach all my work in an instinctive manner. I like leaving a bit of ambiguity so people can bring some of themselves to anything I do.” (Lowe in Butler, 2015)
• “I’m good at composition. I love having a few elements on a page and getting them to balance in a way that excites me. I think this comes from having trained in graphic design before the domination of computers, even in my first job, artwork was done by hand and passed-up on boards. When you are physically moving things around it gives you a much better idea of how they balance” (Lowe in Butler, 2015)
• “In terms of creativity I think we need to have  space. The creative world exists in the border between fact and fiction and sometimes everything needs to be so quantified and proved that the factual elements punch out creativity. I work in quite an instinctive way, but when you have to prove everything then it becomes very tiresome and very hard to make mistakes or produce something that’s new.” (Lowe, 
• “I used to be more known for this organic illustration style, and I’ve refined that to this more geometric style. Every line and pattern that I use is very important. So I use lines and the way they link together is always about trying to play with the expectation of peoples brains.” (Lowe in Glug, 2017)
• “At the basis of it is this love of line for the sake of line. I use them optically, I try to use weird perspectives or in my more organic drawing where every line intersects with every other line and because of  that they create this idea of depth that isn’t there.” (Lowe in Dzierza, 2014)

Himelfarb, E. (2014) “Rob Lowe’s Love/hate relationship with his Supermundane moniker” [Online] Available from: https://eyeondesign.aiga.org/illustrator-rob-lowe-sheds-his-supermundane-moniker/) [Accessed 08/11/17]

Butler, A (2015) “Interview with artist and designer Rob Lowe AKA Supermundane” [Online] Available from: https://www.designboom.com/art/interview-supermundane-05-30-2015/) [Accessed 08/11/17]

Glug. (2017) "Glug Birmingham: Supermundane" [Online Video] Available from: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NP0fCKEeGmE [Accessed 08/11/17]

Dzierza, M. (2014) "Creative types : Rob Lowe aka Supermundane" [Online Video] Available from: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wRz8Y9L0t2g  [Accessed 08/11/17]

Its Nice That. (2016) "Nicer Tuesdays: Supermundane" [Online Video] Available from: https://www.itsnicethat.com/watch/nicer-tuesdays-2016/supermundane [Accessed 08/11/17]

Individual Progress Tutorial

• Possible case studies : Atelier Bingo, Supermundane and David Hockney. 
• 3 main points of discussion in essay : balance, unity and perspective. 
• Use Arnheim as primary theorist - support or deconstruct arguments with other theorists or artist practices. 
• Look at Swiss style and visit Cartwright Hall, Bradford to look at Hockneys. 
• Aim : Chapter 2 and 3 written by group tutorial on 20/11/17, and Chapter 3 planned. 
• Practical - draw a series of shapes inspired by manmade or natural objects, this could then become a distinct visual language to use in all of the images removing any variables that could tamper with judging as to whether they are balanced or harmonised. 

Crit Sheet for Peer Review

Peer Crit Feedback

My feedback was generally positive on the direction of my project, and people seemed to think my question/research was now defined enough to facilitate a good written and practical outcome. A common response was that this is something clearly linked to my own personal concerns as a practitioner and ultimately will benefit my practice. 

Key points to consider in the development of my project:

• Could I focus my project more by relating it to a specific genre or period of art and design? 
• How will I evaluate the two sets of images - rule-based and instinctual? (an exhibition, survey)
• Try making images that purposefully break the rules. 
• Draw the same image/content with and without the rules. (this eliminates variables that could make the judging of these images more subjective to content and taste)
• What kind of images do you want to make? 
• Make images for fun, be repetitive and start experimenting with media e.g. monoprint.
• People preferred the question: Is an image more successful when formed according to rules of composition?

Peer Crit : Self Evaluation

What do you think is working well? 

I think there is a strong synthesis between my practical and written projects. I have also demonstrated a good understanding of theories relating to Gestalt psychology so far in my work. 

How will you capitalise on it?

Use the now basis of understanding of these principles to be more experimental or loose in image-making processes. 

What do you think could be improved? 

Generally I just need to produce more work! In order to do this I think the best thing is to be more experimental and start using media that will give a sense of craft or visual quality to these otherwise simplistic images - such as mono-print, gouache, ink, screen-print. 

How will this be beneficial?

Once I have produced a larger body of work, then I can evaluate more effectively how my own practice is reflecting theories evaluated in my written essay. As well as progress forward into making something more refined towards the completion of the project. 

What do you need to revise/reconsider?

In order to progress forward I need to start using this project more to benefit my own practice, rather than just illustrating theories that I am expressing in my essay. At the beginning I spoke of using this project to improve my craft and find a way of working or visual language that reflects me as a creative practitioner - this is what I need to go back to. 

What will this achieve?

In using this project as an exploration of my own visual language I think this will not only benefit me, but also give a more clear distinction of purpose between the written and practical elements of the research project. 

Things to do leading on from this crit: 

• Create a series of mono-prints or mono-print textures exploring principles of harmony or visual unity. 
• Reflect on what kind of images you want to make. 
• Try and understand what rules of composition are more important/useful to your practice.