Monday, 2 May 2016

Progress Crit


Key points:
  • Need to do more drawings 
  • Explore other medium - collage 
  • Like the square eyes concept - explore other cliché fears of technology? (millenium bug)
  • More abstract images? 
  • Stop spoon-feeding your audience!
Moving Forward:
  • Focus upon the concept of the negative affects surrounding technology - maybe revisit the idea of mindfulness I talked about earlier
  • Do more work! Look at trying to communicate these ideas through means of process and more abstract imagery. 
  • Make work thats better crafted and visual quality - how does your media affect what you are communicating?

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