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- Strong start, real understanding
- Kylie example need changing
- Good triangulation, sources used throughout
- Citations need page numbers
- Another critic theorist – similar all the way through
- Interesting conclusion – start with in introduction. new golden age of print based on digital technologies
- Separating into more paragraphs
- Need to stop using words connective words
- Good sentence structure
- Need to be more economical with language.
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