Crit

Key Points -:

• The visual work looks at two different sides of technology - what its like to be consumed by it and what can be achieved if we move away from using it so often. 
• Own opinions are coming out through work - negative view of technology.
• The visual work moves away from your original essay subject, and you can see the transition into this. 
• The message is clear and not condescending. The use of the symbol and test - makes the message and link to technology clear. 
• The simplicity of the composition, use of negative space and textures really gets across this relaxed atmosphere. 
• The contrast of the nature collages to the hectic patterns of the technology stuff really puts across the intended message 

Ways to move forward -:

• Look at using printing as a technique to make similar work to that of the mindfulness collages - mono-print, potatoe printing, screen printing, lino...?