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Positives :

• Good Triangulation 
• Good use of texts

Things to rework:

• Introduction: outline what you are doing, and why are you doing it. What are you trying to achieve? 
• Outline key principles and rules of composition 
• Mention contemporary design practices and texts that are being triangulated with Arnheim and Ross to prove their relevance to design practice. 
• Make the focus of your essay clear, and structure Chapter II according to key rules/principles used in practical. 

Focus : 

Contemporary composition - NOT linear perspective etc. 

Key principles: unity, order, balance, rhythm, harmony, simplicity and beauty. 

This is then set against artistic individuality and subjective taste. 

What to do:

• Write a clear manifesto/set of rules on composition based on Arnheim, Ross and Gestalt Psychology. 
• Re-structure chapter 2. 
• Re-write introduction.
• Write 2nd and 3rd case study. 
• Write conclusion.